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this windowpane loneliness
has devoured too many stars
making love to ocean beds.

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travelgirlxx Jan 16, 2013
:D
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skirringsilver Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Seamless, flawless, and beautiful. Great work!
The way I read it, that windowpane loneliness is a longing--looking out to the world in admiration, in want--something very bittersweet. That longing has reached to the stars; hopes, dreams, wishes, everything bright and lively, but instead of catching them, has doused their light, crushed them. It looks down, ardently, to darker depths, places without light, without hopes or dreams or life--the ocean beds. Or alternatively, creates tears. A friend told me they're reminded of a lighthouse, reading this. I wonder, what is your interpretation?
Again, this is simply gorgeous :heart:
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DearPoetry Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love your interpretation! :heart:
As for a lighthouse, I could see where she is coming from--and it's beautiful! :)
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chancerox Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
simplicity is it's own kind of beauty. this is beautiful, dear. :heart:
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DearPoetry Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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mexican-polarbear Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
I love how short and just perfect this is.
Great job :)
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DearPoetry Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. C:
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PowderedAnthrax Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it when work can be interpereted many different ways. This is true poetry, in my humble opinion, because one must delve beneath the surface to reveal the many hidden layers.
It really made me think, and I thank you for that. :)
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DearPoetry Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You get it! :heart:
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wdnest Jan 11, 2013  Professional Writer
Lovely poem.
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