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It’s day two

& I already feel
shriveled, lungless,
overworked.

I’ve been living
out of my suitcase
since I got home,
sleeping
on the couch &
leaving my laundry
on the floor.

Everything in my refrigerator
screams 12 days too late
& rent money is due.

She’s slapping me
in the face,
you see.

Depression,
that heartless bitch
with the long
spider legs
& hot mouth-

she enjoys
throwing me
into furniture-
up against
thin walls

& having her way with me.
NaPoWriMo day 2

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I feel like a whore.
My writing style is changing
and I couldn't care less.
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xBlackCherryBlossoms Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
I feel like this is the karst anybody's came to putting depression into words. I have goosebumps.
This is amazing.
Stay strong love. ^_^
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You think?  It's been done countless times,
figured it was a bit cliche if anything. lol
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xBlackCherryBlossoms Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
Closest*
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kaelamae Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Student Writer
Your words never fail to send shivers down my spine. Yes most of us are broken, but eventually we will all be saved.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! :)
But we should learn to save ourselves first!
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kaelamae Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student Writer
I completely agree my dear!
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SoraLove Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Great descriptions!! :heart:
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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mad-genious Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
nononononononono you are no whore no matter how you feel.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
If you say so.
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