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I want to wrap myself in your air,
hold your secrets between my
ribcage-embrace & just
                      breathe.
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is so stunning
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rockthearts14 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful <3
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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TheBloodyEpicPumpkin Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student Writer
I used your title in a found poem: [link]
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome! :)
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:icondompteurloup:
DompteurLoup Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My mind can't really grasp the meaning, but once I read this my chest tightened with a painful longing..
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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:iconheart809:
heart809 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
...I know this feeling. It's so wonderful.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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:icondestroying-caden:
Destroying-Caden Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Beautiful as always.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:icondestroying-caden:
Destroying-Caden Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Of course :)
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:icontwilight-artist:
Twilight-artist Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Are you planning to publish and sell any of your work? I'd buy it in an instant!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Everyone seems to be asking me this lately.
ANd the answer is, "Yes, as soon as I get off my lazy ass and actually do something." lol
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:icontwilight-artist:
Twilight-artist Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, do let everyone know when it's out!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Of course! :)
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:iconsoullguyy:
soullguyy Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
very nice haiku
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Not a haiku. :)
Haiku's are '5, 7, 5'.
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EclecticConcierge Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
Really good! I love how it's so short and concise.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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randomlyinspired-21 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Writer
Simple yet elegant-there's so much in just a few words! :love:

I like the formatting in this piece, especially the 'breathe' part
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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randomlyinspired-21 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Writer
:)

I think your title's misspelled (Auguest should be August), but it's just me I guess. :hug:
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No, you're right. lol
I posted this late last night, guess I didn't pay enough attention.
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randomlyinspired-21 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Writer
oh ok then! :hug:
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randomlyinspired-21 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Writer
but the title seems mispelled- shouldn't it be 'August' instead of 'Auguest'? Just asking. :love:
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its-a-yetti Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it's possibly a misspelling,but I think it might be a play on words. just...guessing. :)
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randomlyinspired-21 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Writer
I guess so. :)
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