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a rebellion
tucked away
in her chest.

they say
she's got skin
unworthy to write
poetry on,
but
she tapes those
lovelies
to her limbs
anyway.
:icondearpoetry:
don't tell her she can't.
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~UselessItalian Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I adore this poem.
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*bloodawni Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, this is gorgeous in its simplicity.
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~DearPoetry Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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*bloodawni Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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Mood: Love ~Elaine-Moon Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh gosh. All of your poetry is so amazing!
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~DearPoetry Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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`dreamsinstatic Jan 18, 2013  Professional Writer
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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~DearPoetry Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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`dreamsinstatic Jan 19, 2013  Professional Writer
You're welcome.
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~tiajones Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i absolutely adore this piece.

1. i love the first three lines, about having a rebellion tucked away in her chest. it makes her seem so powerful, yet unseen. like she's waiting for the day that power should be unleashed.

2. i also love that you'd said "they say she's got skin unworthy to write poetry on". often- people think it's silly to write poetry on your skin, so if they think she's unworthy even of that, it seems they think very low of her

3. i love the temporary feeling and the imagery when you read "she tapes those lovelies to her limbs anyway." i can almost see her standing there- neruda and sandburg and sexton, all these pages ripped out and taped to her with her arms stretched wide.

absolutely lovely :heart:
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