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1. i love the first three lines, about having a rebellion tucked away in her chest. it makes her seem so powerful, yet unseen. like she's waiting for the day that power should be unleashed.
2. i also love that you'd said "they say she's got skin unworthy to write poetry on". often- people think it's silly to write poetry on your skin, so if they think she's unworthy even of that, it seems they think very low of her
3. i love the temporary feeling and the imagery when you read "she tapes those lovelies to her limbs anyway." i can almost see her standing there- neruda and sandburg and sexton, all these pages ripped out and taped to her with her arms stretched wide.
absolutely lovely