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They said
she has starving
little poet fingers,

& lungs-

filled with
the heroic hearts
of nameless protagonists.

But, she cries

tears of Saturn
on too-little-sleep nights,
& coffee ringed mornings.

They call her vanilla.

Innocence,
much too ripe to fall
with freckles on her
wander(lust)
shoulder-blades
singing connect-the-dot

blues.
Her love is hungry.
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:iconraynechordalyne:
RayneChordalyne Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
I really like this. :)
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! :)
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:iconjoeybelle18:
JoeyBelle18 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
very beautiful. I can't decide whether this one, or Blood is my favorite so far.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, really? :)
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:iconjoeybelle18:
JoeyBelle18 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Absolutely!!
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:iconriseandbe:
RiseandBe Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can't decide which lines are my favorite, they are all so good! The imagery is lovely. The emotion is powerful. Beautiful work!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :heart:
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:iconriseandbe:
RiseandBe Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure, dear!
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:iconblazinmoon:
Blazinmoon Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You have opened my eyes 0_o
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah? :)
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