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but I write so fucking flowery
it makes me sick,
rose scented stars & love.


No.


Her: helpless as a lamb,


I want raw, aching
bone against bone
exploring the exposed, naked
poetry of her universe-

( warm, celestial hands
        forging sandcastle ribs. )

Southern earth beneath her feet,
wanderlust burned like Apollo's touch
into her spinal cord,  please awaken
the empty space between her skin


& mine.
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xxAiko-chanxx Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful as always
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DearPoetry Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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bloodawni Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello, I wanted to let you know I've used your lovely title in my newest Title Poem, 'ghost eyes and disparagement'. If you wanted to read it, the link is here - but this comment is really just to let you know how I've made use of your gorgeous title. :)
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DearPoetry Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh awesome, thanks!  Love the poem, by the way! :)
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bloodawni Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it.
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BeautifulMermaid Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. :o (Eek) Giggle Heart +fav Huggle! 
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DearPoetry Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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haphazardmelody Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This has some truly gorgeous imagery in it. :)
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DearPoetry Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Firebirdfly Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're a really beautiful writer, and you're not wasting your talent! :D Thanks for posting, this is just.... jaw-dropping.
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