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but I write so fucking flowery
it makes me sick,
rose scented stars & love.


No.


Her: helpless as a lamb,


I want raw, aching
bone against bone
exploring the exposed, naked
poetry of her universe-

( warm, celestial hands
        forging sandcastle ribs. )

Southern earth beneath her feet,
wanderlust burned like Apollo's touch
into her spinal cord,  please awaken
the empty space between her skin


& mine.

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Mood: Mesmerized ~Firebirdfly Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're a really beautiful writer, and you're not wasting your talent! :D Thanks for posting, this is just.... jaw-dropping.
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~DearPoetry Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the compliment! It means a lot!
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*Tina-RPs-PointGiver Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THis is so very amazing and truth rings in this and the words that you used is amazing I'm no expert in poetry but this is one of the best I have read. it is simple but has a lot of emotion weaves into it. Amazing job!
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~DearPoetry Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :heart:
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*Tina-RPs-PointGiver Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your very welcome^^
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*Kieran-W Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this poem! Reality dripping from every word. lol I am not a poet at all, but I love your work. It inspires me in mine, just waanted to let you know :)
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~DearPoetry Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad to be of some inspiration to you!
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*Kieran-W Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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~starshinexx Jan 26, 2013  Student Writer
I think you said everything I've ever wanted to say about my writing better than I ever could. I want raw, powerful, hungry and roaming, mind boggling, what is the universe really made of poetry. flowery is good but not when its all you can do.
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~DearPoetry Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...Another one trick pony.
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