THis is so very amazing and truth rings in this and the words that you used is amazing I'm no expert in poetry but this is one of the best I have read. it is simple but has a lot of emotion weaves into it. Amazing job!
I love this poem! Reality dripping from every word. lol I am not a poet at all, but I love your work. It inspires me in mine, just waanted to let you know
I think you said everything I've ever wanted to say about my writing better than I ever could. I want raw, powerful, hungry and roaming, mind boggling, what is the universe really made of poetry. flowery is good but not when its all you can do.