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but I merely bit my lip when she asked me,

"What is it you're thankful for?"

How could I tell her
I was thankful for this heart
that beats a thousand times over
when I hear her speak?

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I think she already knew.

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~xxAiko-chanxx Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is very beautiful <3
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~DearPoetry Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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~BlacK-Kat9 Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
See. This is what I mean by your work.
You capture a moment like a camera would.
It reminds me of the moment I'm going through right now :/

even in such little words
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:icondearpoetry:
~DearPoetry Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes it's the little poems that have the most to say. :)
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~Vlemode Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
ohhhh god just die and born again, is so small get so simple and perfec as if sometimes we dont need that much of words to express something just a feeling
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~DearPoetry Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! :)
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:iconrockyprice:
An excellent piece. I was slightly confused because I separated the title from the poem the first time I read it. Then I got it.
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:icondearpoetry:
~DearPoetry Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you figured it out. Thank you!
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~JoeyBelle18 Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I love this almost too much. So sweet.
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~DearPoetry Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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