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but I merely bit my lip when she asked me,

"What is it you're thankful for?"

How could I tell her
I was thankful for this heart
that beats a thousand times over
when I hear her speak?
I think she already knew.
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xxAiko-chanxx Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is very beautiful <3
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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BlacK-Kat9 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
See. This is what I mean by your work.
You capture a moment like a camera would.
It reminds me of the moment I'm going through right now :/

even in such little words
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes it's the little poems that have the most to say. :)
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Vlemode Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
ohhhh god just die and born again, is so small get so simple and perfec as if sometimes we dont need that much of words to express something just a feeling
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! :)
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RockyPrice Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
An excellent piece. I was slightly confused because I separated the title from the poem the first time I read it. Then I got it.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you figured it out. Thank you!
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JoeyBelle18 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I love this almost too much. So sweet.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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Rain-kissed-drops Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Simple, and so very heart-felt. :huggle:
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I try. :)
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Blazinmoon Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awww!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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IchiHitsuFangirl Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Fantastic as per usual. :3 Your writing never ceases to astound me.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really? This one was pretty simple though.
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IchiHitsuFangirl Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The simplicity of a poem is not directly proportional to its ability to astound. :3
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rosesienna Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
straight from the heart! I love this free verse
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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Evalyhn Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Damnit, I love your poetry. <3
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you!
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Nyatto Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. Your poetry is so eloquent.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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GeekGirl97 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just beautiful :33 :heart:
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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GeekGirl97 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome ^^
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TheInkheart Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful poem! :heart: Really connected to me and a very similar situation I am going through now. :( If you ever want to talk, then just note me! :hug:
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No I'm fine, but thank you!
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LightningIdle Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful. Great job, especially for such a short, sweet poem.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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