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& faces,
& people.

I want to forget their veins,
fingerprints forever burned into my eyelids;
wrists I can't look at
without longing to tear apart.

Spine full, and spiteful:

I want to cry
roses in my midnight tea
for these star collapsed lungs.

I want to cry for her
& for me.

But Shame,
she wont allow me the courtesy.
First poem of 2013.

What is one more thing to add to my huge list of disappointments? I can always add one more.

Very personal.
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UselessItalian Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. :3
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The-Obsessive-Artist Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
"She won't allow me the courtesy"

I love that line and I love your poetry. I'm a newcomer of sorts and I wonder how I haven't seen your work before. Lovely :heart:
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, thank you! Do you mean to say you are a newcomer to writing? :)
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:iconthe-obsessive-artist:
The-Obsessive-Artist Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
To your poetry :)
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, well--welcome aboard. :)
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:iconthe-obsessive-artist:
The-Obsessive-Artist Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you, I'm sure I'll enjoy the ride.
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runkantusrun Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i love it your so amazing sorry havent been on in a while i been having some trouble
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's all good! Thank you!
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:iconrunkantusrun:
runkantusrun Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome =)
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ianjolie Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Writer
This is structured so well. I like the light, sprinkled rhyme. Also,

"Spine full, and spiteful:"

ooohhh, shivers, amazing turn. :heart:
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