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I have been suffocating
on the stars of my past
like horny gentlemen
do with innocent looking
wolfgirls at 3am- their bite
fearless as thieves.

My lilac lungs are breathing in
dust and the tears of Saturn’s
nameless moons,
while the rest of me -
well, shes warm off wine
and poems left

unfinished.
You are no longer caged.
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:iconyogapoetmama:
yogapoetmama Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful dark poetry. I love it
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sairey Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I admire your work greatly!!
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LeftUnfinished Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love the imagery. :)
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Tenshi-no-hane-Okami Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beutifull
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DoktorSpankenstein Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
mmmmm... caged.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You bring smiles to my face. :heart:
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DoktorSpankenstein Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
Gimme half a chance and I can make some of your other body parts smile too... :D
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
smooth. ;)
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annathepanda123 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Writer
I haven't even taken this poem out of my messages despite the fact that I've read it so many times I have most of it memorized. There's something really unique and relatable about this poem and  I'm sure everyone must be understanding some different concept than me. Sometimes the way people interact reminds me of a competition as to who can destroy the other one first. Who can hold the other prisoner and  inflict the most damage? Being a writer gives you a sense of clarity, an unbiased third person perspective and it often makes you feel like an outsider, like you know some secret everyone else is too ignorant to pick up on. Like you breathe different air and cry different tears. Where others find pleasure in destroying and owning others you find pleasure in the numbness of alcohol aka writing. That's what I got from this poem it's my first critique so I hope it wasn't mind blowingly wrong! I absolutely love this poem :)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, just wow.
I hadn't even thought of it that way.
I'm speechless, and in awe of your interpretation.
I couldn't agree more!
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Metaroy110 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
amazing
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Sokosof Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful :)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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kaelamae Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Writer
Was hooked in at the title. Absolutely beautiful my dear. 
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! ^^
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skyres2 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
wolfgirl? i kind of drew that a bit :D

i call her gear girl and she has wolf ears and a wolfs tail and 2 sharp teeth :3
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sherbetblooms Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
love this so much :heart:
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad! ^^
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SythMog Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm taking this way more personal to me than it is (from the writers perspective)... ! Well done.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
intresting description, awesome job!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
oh no problem! would you like to read one chapter of a fantasy novel that i wrote? It's only the first one and you can stop if you wish!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Is it posted here on dA? :)
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TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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keo73650 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Interesting descriptions. Very unique! :iconamgtouchplz:
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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XxAlleyxCatxX Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
breathtaking. how do you come up with such unique poems? 

i'm guessing this is about your past?
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I have no idea. lol
And yes, in its own special way.
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RAE8892 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

I'm not sure why, but this hits my heart in all the right ways. Perhaps its just where I am in life right now . . . It really speaks to me.


My favorite of yours so far :heart:

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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My head never seems to be in the right place.
Glad you like it though.
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RAE8892 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Mine either

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