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She corrodes star shapes into
the hearts of sleeping poets,
slowly, methodically.
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:iconfreerangepenguin:
freerangepenguin Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
I've read a lot of awful haiku - this is not one of them. Simply beautiful. :)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Not a haiku, but thank you nonetheless! :)
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tiajones Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lovely. <3
maybe i just haven't been on in a while, but i'm being blown away by how fantastic this set of poems from you is.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you! :)
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:icontiajones:
tiajones Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
of course! <3
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Bleeding-Magic Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Student Photographer
You don't need tons of verses to project beauty. You can do it in just one word. :heart:
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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:iconchancerox:
chancerox Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you should do a 9 muses series.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You mean the 9 goddesses? :)
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chancerox Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that would be interesting too :) i was thinking about the 9 muses from greek mythology!

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you interpret things beautifully, i would love to see what you could do with them :)
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I was right! :) I'll have to try my hand at it some day. :D
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oviedomedina Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Said so much, in so little.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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cesca-specs Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely work. Succinct and evocative!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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WeirdGirl14 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I accidentally read "the hearts of sleeping poets"

as

"the hearts of sleeping potatoes."

...:meow:

I really liked the poem! It's very lovely! :aww:
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
LOL! Thank cracked me up!
Thank you!
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girlofhearts101 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Student Artist
Very beautiful!:heart:
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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girlofhearts101 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Artist
You're welcome friend!:)
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Viidith22 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful :)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, care to send her my way? I could use someone to give me some inspiration. Running a bit low on stardust, here.

On a serious note, I adore this. It's so simple, yet elegant. Seriously, I'm going to have to begin worshipping you sooner or later on how much you inspire me. Ahhhh. ;_;
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You can have her, she doesn't seem to want me anymore anyway. lol

Thank you, glad you like it. But there is definitely no need to worship me. :)
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Let's hope she works on my actual stories, not dumb fanfictions and poetry. :|

Nuuuuuhz. I will worship you if I want. I will do it noncreepily. Don't judge. You're just that much of an inspiration to me; you don't know how much. I'll say it over and over again. (:
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FoxofEbony Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
This is beautiful :D
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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FoxofEbony Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
You're welcome :D
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painfulkisses13 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Very beautifully composed.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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painfulkisses13 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Welcome!
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Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I thought it was a haiku oomg : ( imsorry.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, it's cool!
I actually checked after I wrote it myself!
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Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I recently found a deep love for haiku's. this one is far more advanced then mine but ill get there >:)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...I have a few haiku's in my gallery. C:
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