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I’ve got 30 days
to defy Icarus:
teach this rose thorn heart
how to fly.
[  All I want to be
       is the space between
                      the stars.
 
                                    ]
But, I’m here,
ripping holes in blank pages
while nursing nebulae knuckles
with white plastered walls.
My first poem of the month, enjoy.

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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013   General Artist
wonderful work! :clap:
congratulations on teh DLD, dolly! :love:
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013   General Artist
most welcome! :heart:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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:iconlady-yume:
Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013   Writer
Hello (: I'm just stopping by to tell you that your beautiful work has been featured in my latest journal; [link] :heart:
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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:iconrandomcoloradan:
RandomColoradan Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Whoa... I am beat. You didn't even need to...just whoa.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Need to what? :/
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:iconrandomcoloradan:
RandomColoradan Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
I don't even need to think about it: the message is so clear.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, :)
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:iconshyanne-kai:
Shyanne-Kai Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
I know this feeling! (But you describe it better...)
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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:iconcrazyruthie:
crazyruthie Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013   Traditional Artist
well done!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconneonsquiggle:
neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconyahoolyafool:
YahoolYafool Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Once again your wonderful words have managed to charm a fave out of me :D great job on this
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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:iconyahoolyafool:
YahoolYafool Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem :D
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:iconnightwitch55:
NightWitch55 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. I had no idea there was such a thing as NaPoWriMo….I'm two days behind, But I'm totally doing this.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Do it! <3
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:iconnightwitch55:
NightWitch55 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Done it. <3
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
But if you were the space between the stars, you couldn't write us fantastic poems that drip thought-provoking imagery! ;_;
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol, I suppose not. <3
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:iconricardo-orozco:
Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you always take advantage of imagery !
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...It never complains. ;)
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:iconfoxofebony:
FoxofEbony Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
Beautiful :D
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconfoxofebony:
FoxofEbony Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
You're welcome :D
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:iconpairou:
Pairou Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Beautiful imagery! I think the "rose thorn heart" is a bit out of place though, is my only criticism (against the Icarus, flying, space theme).
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I was trying to imply that it's 'tied down'. :)
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:iconpairou:
Pairou Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Ohh, I see! I think different wording would be a bit better (following the theme). Like I said, that's the only part I didn't like; I am basically in love with it otherwise!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'll see what I can do. :D Thanks for the feedback!
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:iconumez:
umez Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Student
it a nice poem keep it up. :)
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:icondawnfire2025:
Dawnfire2025 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love it!

Im doing NanoWrimo too! (except im writing a novel)
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I thought that was in November?
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:icondawnfire2025:
Dawnfire2025 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Normally, yes. But I'm doing Camp NanoWrimo, where you can set your own word goal instead of 50,000.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh--I didn't know about that!
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:iconfoobarph:
foobarph Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great writing pal!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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:icontopec:
topec Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't even know that was a thing. I knew about NaNoWriMo of course. If I was a poet, I'd be all over this and I know it.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's a thing. I think every month is a thing. :D
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:icontopec:
topec Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm, maybe your right. Well, have fun with your month of poetry. I'll stick to prose. I understand that much, much better. :D
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ClockworkWhite Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm in love with your poetry.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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:iconchancerox:
chancerox Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful as usual. :)
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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WiNGz69 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student Writer
This one put a smile on my face no matter how desperately I sought otherwise. Grr, why do you do this to me (admittedly I really like this piece not to mention I can see wisdom dripping from some of those lines). Well done.
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