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She thinks there are nebulae
in the rough of my gutter bones,
some stargazing sanctuary
for lonely outcasts to lay their heads.

I am but a car crash,
spellbound
inside eyelids,
& red inked corrections
on crosshatched skin.

Made up of moans,
the clutching of bedsheets;
I am contemplating
ripping my ribs apart
& proving
I never had a heart at all.

But my moon shy love;
she is determined
to try & wake the dead.
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Cloudish-Mar-Xeph Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
After I read this ... I was talking to a friend of mine, and I started talking in a poetic way, I was talking in a style like this (your poem thing), and he said "what has gotten into you?" And I responded with "Can I speak in poetry from now on?" But still, this is an amazing poem, I love all your work, and can relate to allot of it. Thanks for making such wonderful work for the rest of us to enjoy :)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's so funny!  Thank you! :)
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013   General Artist
congratulations on the DLD, dearling :huggle:
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, hon! :)
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014   General Artist
sure thing! (:
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! I'm Jasmine, a staff blogger from :iconpoeticalcondition:. Just to let you know I've featured your piece in this journal: poeticalcondition.deviantart.c…
It's a round-up of all of our members who have received a DLD or DD over the past 9 days, so please do check it out!
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Rieal-Dragonsbane Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I find the first three stanzas explosively beautiful, and the last is the perfect landing.
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I wish I had more feedback to give, but this was just amazing and impactful.  Thank you for sharing with the world.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Congratulations on the DLD! This is amazing; the imagery is just perfect.
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days-be-strange Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Student Writer
Heart  imagery is beautiful
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