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You were a mid-morning train wreck,
the embodiment of poetry.

& my clavicles whispered too many nothings
about your summer storm hands,
folding like paper cranes
to make wishes upon themselves.

wishes are for the weak-
stand up,
do something about this quaking heart
& freezing fingers.

Anything.


I think I found God then,
lurking behind wanderlust eyes.
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Cloudish-Mar-Xeph Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I must admit, I love you and your writing
Your poems depict views in a way I cannot, sadly,
I write in a book everyday,
and sometimes, I go on poetic rants, about anything mostly,
the random yelling about stuff in a sing-song voice is normally better than what I write though.
I must say, you are an amazing,
and very very talented person.
You fill my heart and mind with joy and sadness and mishap and wonder with each line and letter.
:)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: Thank you for this!
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AgentBabycakes Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Holy mother, that's amazeballs.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol!
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panther372040 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
'Paint moments' you do, quite well I might add, I think I like that quote as much as the poem!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :heart: :heart:

Thank you!
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themorningtrain Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Wow, this is a really phenomenal story. It's always incredible when a writer can sum up a huge part of your life in a few choice words. Thank you for writing this, and for bringing peace to a part of my life.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, glad you enjoyed it so much. :D
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RomanloverofGermania Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy Hell you are so talented!!!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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von19 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Writer
Dafuq...
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Problem?
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Lightless142 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
I don't normally write poetry in english anymore but everytime I read what you came up with so many nice wordings and phrases come into my mind~ very inspiring once again :D
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you so much! :D
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tiajones Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"wishes are for the weak-
stand up,
do something about this quaking heart
& freezing fingers.

Anything."
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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michi-iyo Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
the title is a perfect 6-word story.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hadn't even realized that. Lol! I'm no good at those. I have too much to say.
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EmoWolfSam Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, such a thrilling piece of work!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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YahoolYafool Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
how is it that only your poems can leave me speechless? this is amazing again :D
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know. Lol thank you!
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YahoolYafool Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha your welcome :D
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AznAngel4ever Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're such a great poet, every time I read one of your poems it leaves me kinda speechless.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow! Thank you. :heart:
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AznAngel4ever Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome. :)
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I wish I knew how to describe the feelings all your poetry gives me. :) This is absolutely stunning as always. I love the imagery you create. Everything is always so...wondrous.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I try to paint moments. Thank you. :heart:
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MickeyFebruary Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Writer
Another great piece! Your syntax enthralls me. <3
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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aikalikka Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I got chills again...
you give me a fever at this rate.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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