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You were a mid-morning train wreck,
the embodiment of poetry.

& my clavicles whispered too many nothings
about your summer storm hands,
folding like paper cranes
to make wishes upon themselves.

wishes are for the weak-
stand up,
do something about this quaking heart
& freezing fingers.

Anything.


I think I found God then,
lurking behind wanderlust eyes.
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:iconagentbabycakes:
Holy mother, that's amazeballs.
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:icondearpoetry:
~DearPoetry Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol!
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:iconpanther372040:
'Paint moments' you do, quite well I might add, I think I like that quote as much as the poem!
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:icondearpoetry:
~DearPoetry Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :heart: :heart:

Thank you!
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:iconthemorningtrain:
Wow, this is a really phenomenal story. It's always incredible when a writer can sum up a huge part of your life in a few choice words. Thank you for writing this, and for bringing peace to a part of my life.
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:icondearpoetry:
~DearPoetry Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, glad you enjoyed it so much. :D
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~RomanloverofGermania Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy Hell you are so talented!!!
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:icondearpoetry:
~DearPoetry Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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~von19 Feb 11, 2013  Student Writer
Dafuq...
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:icondearpoetry:
~DearPoetry Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Problem?
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