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You were a mid-morning train wreck,
the embodiment of poetry.

& my clavicles whispered too many nothings
about your summer storm hands,
folding like paper cranes
to make wishes upon themselves.

wishes are for the weak-
stand up,
do something about this quaking heart
& freezing fingers.

Anything.


I think I found God then,
lurking behind wanderlust eyes.
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Cloudish-Mar-Xeph Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I must admit, I love you and your writing
Your poems depict views in a way I cannot, sadly,
I write in a book everyday,
and sometimes, I go on poetic rants, about anything mostly,
the random yelling about stuff in a sing-song voice is normally better than what I write though.
I must say, you are an amazing,
and very very talented person.
You fill my heart and mind with joy and sadness and mishap and wonder with each line and letter.
:)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: Thank you for this!
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AgentBabycakes Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Holy mother, that's amazeballs.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol!
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panther372040 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
'Paint moments' you do, quite well I might add, I think I like that quote as much as the poem!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :heart: :heart:

Thank you!
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themorningtrain Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Wow, this is a really phenomenal story. It's always incredible when a writer can sum up a huge part of your life in a few choice words. Thank you for writing this, and for bringing peace to a part of my life.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, glad you enjoyed it so much. :D
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RomanloverofGermania Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy Hell you are so talented!!!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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