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you’re a
temperamental bitch
that moans when I go.

You compare
alcohol
to happiness.

You creep
from throats
& bones
like some
hungry monster.

But Poetry,
language
was invented
for you.

You awoke
a rhythm
between my
fingertips
that still
taunts
me.

You’re either a
vital organ,
or blood.

However, Poetry,
are you cheaper
than the women
in the empty spaces
of my life-

or the secrets
I write
between my thighs?

Poetry,
I am Fifty Shades
of girl.

Why should I feed you?

Do you know
what to do
with my body
when you are merely
ink stained fingers
soaked in passing

& the fevers
conjured
within burning stars?

I didn’t think so.
Another randomly generated facebook status poem.
Interested in seeing what you can make? ---> what-would-i-say.com/
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014   General Artist
:wave: I just wanted let you know this has been featured in Awesome Art.I light pink heart bullet green heart bullet blue heart bullet
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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow that reall worked well with this one :O.

It came across as the kind of writing the unhappy totally addicted to alcohol and sigarets writers would write. oh I love those :D
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imaginative-lioness Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Holy crap, this poem is the product of randomly generated Facebook statuses? :O That's incredible!

I cannot believe that you had the patience to write something like this, and use such an interesting technique. The poem didn't feel disjointed at all which sometimes can happen when you do something like this, but this poem of yours just flows so beautifully. Also, once again you have displayed your brilliance at crafting such mouthwatering imagery. :heart:
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Kleigen Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
A relation between love/hate to the poetry itself? Not bad, sounds powerful :) Isn't poetry a double edged sword to love the inner land of our feelings and hating the darkness of the world we are on?
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Couldn't have said it better myself!
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Kleigen Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Just keep the good feelings within with your poetry :)
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oviedomedina Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
Talk about a love/hate letter!
Love this!
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FirecrackerLady Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student General Artist
This is so intriguing.  Great job!  I write poetry also, If you feel like checking it out and giving me feedback here's one firecrackerlady.deviantart.com…
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BlueSoulGreenMind Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
Jeez this is great. Thanks for introducing that app. It gets the creative juices flowing. Its neat haha.
this is my favorite line:
"You awoke
a rhythm
between my
fingertips
that still
taunts
me.

You’re either a
vital organ,
or blood."

Those words hit hard.
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Student Writer
:heart:

I might just have to try this.

btwIsawthisfirstonTumblrandIwaslikeEEEEEEEILOVEIT
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