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It’s like counting
Saturn’s rings,
hash marks
along your limbs -
remembering a time
when

‘just one more’

made you feel better.

- & you’re sitting there
wondering why
Draco, stuck in limbo
always looks like he’s


falling.

-dp
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ggernaut3 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love this! It really is wonderful, its a good poem, i hope i can write like you someday!
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freespirit-edwarrior Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW ANOTHER AMAZING POEM! You are so talented!


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spillingover Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow.What a work of art, seriously.This describes everything its like, you picked such perfect words, and you crafted them together so well, its so beautiful.I wish i could do half as good as you. This is so beautiful, it took my breath away.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, so glad you liked it!
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Firebirdfly Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very powerful, the metaphors are beautiful. Watching, your stuff is thought-provoking and beautiful. :)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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heavensvalentine Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
It triggers me, but don't apologize. This is so beautiful I wouldn't mind reading it over and over.
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Winter995 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
You kinda take my mind back to a misrible place I thought (I hoped) I had left forever
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry. :(
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tweehooligan Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is great work, keep it up.I look up to you and your art, its simply beautiful!
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