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Your words tore into my abdomen like vultures feeding on
the raw emotion their filthy wings stirred up from the dust.

My ribs cracked from the blow.

But, I think sometimes
of how these were the ribs
that should have chased you away from me,
quietly wondering how you managed to
slither past this cage of bone and flesh
to engrave your fingerprints into my marrow.

You were sweat & spice & scars-

Your eyes,
a thunderstorm of black and blue sex
jarring and devouring my insides,
shaped a faithless religion
through the cracks & broken shards
of my hollowed out womb.

(I want my insides back.)

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:iconscorpionholiday:
aaah I love this. this is so remarkable, beautiful, and powerful. It was a passionate read from beginning to end, and I enjoyed every word. I might have to start following you!
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DearPoetry May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it!
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:iconthemorningtrain:
The last line, "I want my insides back" is powerful.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :D
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chewyraezen Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautifully done!
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DearPoetry Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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craneHARDCORE Oct 12, 2012   General Artist
Wow this is just amazing.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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craneHARDCORE Oct 13, 2012   General Artist
You're welcome!
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livinittothemaxx Oct 6, 2012  Student General Artist
beautiful.
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