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Your words tore into my abdomen like vultures feeding on
the raw emotion their filthy wings stirred up from the dust.

My ribs cracked from the blow.

But, I think sometimes
of how these were the ribs
that should have chased you away from me,
quietly wondering how you managed to
slither past this cage of bone and flesh
to engrave your fingerprints into my marrow.

You were sweat & spice & scars-

Your eyes,
a thunderstorm of black and blue sex
jarring and devouring my insides,
shaped a faithless religion
through the cracks & broken shards
of my hollowed out womb.

(I want my insides back.)

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ClosetArtist97 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student General Artist
I wish I could write the way you do. Your lines flow very nicely and you have a great choice of words. It's absolutely flawless and beautiful.
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ScorpionHoliday Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
aaah I love this. this is so remarkable, beautiful, and powerful. It was a passionate read from beginning to end, and I enjoyed every word. I might have to start following you!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it!
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themorningtrain Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
The last line, "I want my insides back" is powerful.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :D
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautifully done!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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craneHARDCORE Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012   General Artist
Wow this is just amazing.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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craneHARDCORE Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012   General Artist
You're welcome!
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