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i've got love carved into honeysuckle wrists,
a murder of crows in my throat,
& a pack of wolves at my back.

i want to know truths behind these myth eyes, &
the distant galaxies under your fingertips.

but, love me. love me, Love.
show me what's beyond Grimm fairy tales
& scars.

spare me your ribs;

this skyscraper heart
needs a place to go.
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:iconmidnightbluedestiny:
And I honestly mean everyone of the 20/20 stars I gave this poem.
the way it's worded is beautiful and amazing, I think you should publish a book of your poems! they're so original yet so beautifully worded it's like taking a walk in your imagination because of the amazing detail and description you use!
You aren't obcessed with comments or faves, you write because you're a writer and I love that, I love the way you write and i hope you never stop!
seriously I could read your poetry for ever and still not have enough, you're exactly the person I want to meet in real life.
xxxx
Celestia.
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:icontitoroxas-cotouchiha:
Simply amazing. Quite beautiful. This poem has that feeling of a lover that wishes for someone to love him back. You do deserve the 20/20, no doubt of it.
I loved this poem, and I know I will love any other poems you make. Keep it up. Althouhg I don't trust love anymore, perhaps you'll make me try one more time to feel that dangerous but beautiful sensation. People like you are those who are ment to be called "poet(ess)".
I loved it, I loved it, I loved it, I loved it, I loved it!!
Just a tip: to make it look more "decent", you should write the fisrt letter of each verse with initial capital letters.
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monstermanga1022 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist
so true...
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:iconadagiobunny:
Adagiobunny Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student Writer
such a sense of the vast & the personal, something wanting to burst out of its shell...
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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:iconclosetedwicca:
ClosetedWicca Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Professional Artist
"honeysuckle wrists" you are a genious. wish I knew you.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww! I'm not all that special.
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:iconpseudonymlizziedelov:
Hide that you bloody fascist! Stepping all over my rights for freedom of speech! Why, no wonder you have all the bloody praise... any critique you delete!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not looking for drama.
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:iconpseudonymlizziedelov:
This poem sucks!
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:iconkenalli:
Kenalli Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my goodness this poem reminded me why I miss having internet so much. You can be gone forever but come back and find something amazing like this! Kudos to your talent.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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