Over 1,000 letters have found their way
to the pulsating heart of my wastebasket.
Until you.
You carried them away saying, "I'll use these
to fill the empty spaces of my universe."
You proceeded to tape them to your eyelids,
wear them like Augusts leaves along your limbs.
"I will be your voice and I will sing your words to the trees."
Slender spider fingers prancing across my misspelled scrawl.
My personal favorite part:
You proceeded to tape them to your eyelids,
wear them like Augusts leaves along your limbs.
"I will be your voice and I will sing your words to the trees."
Slender spider fingers prancing across my misspelled scrawl.
The imagery evoked is stunning.
Although I am no expert to discuss techniques, however I like yours simple because I enjoy reading your poems and can relate to them.
Simply a beautiful poem all in all with a unique driving force behind.
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