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Your eyes,
a thunderstorm of black and blue sex
jarring and devouring my insides,
shaped a faithless religion
through the cracks & broken shards
of my hollowed out womb.

I want my insides back.

I have a strange thought process. I scribble these little 'nothings' in my notebooks.

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Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Writer
"I scribble these little 'bits of genius' in my notebooks."

Fixed that for you.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! :heart:
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Starkpretty Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Please keep scribbling. They are little gems.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, I will. :)
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Starkpretty Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Good good! :D
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Starkpretty Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
no problem :D
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LevonAnthony Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I read your collaboration where this was a piece of it first and I'm literally speechless. You're a fantastic writer.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! <3
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LevonAnthony Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome!
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bitteryetsweet Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
Scorpio eyes :P
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love that.
'Scorpio eyes', how pretty.
Must use it in a poem, if you don't mind. :)
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bitteryetsweet Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
No problem.

I thought the poem described the way the horoscope describes the eyes of a Scorpio. Never really believed in it though; I'm also a Scorpio myself.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am too.
We are the best of the horoscope! :heart:
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVE that last line!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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Wickedsick008 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
love this!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Wickedsick008 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
You're welcome!
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superluckystar Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
Short horrifing love it. That is all
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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superluckystar Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
no probs!
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
This is short but amazing!! I love the way you think <3
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes, I do to. <3
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
<3 <3 :)
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mycatlikestuna Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Student
Me too. I am so glad that I'm not the only one.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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autumn-spirit Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
your eyes, a thunderstorm of black and blue sex.." "a faithless religion".. Genius! :D
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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autumn-spirit Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
anytime :)
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
fffffffffffffff........ I love your poems.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :D
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nono, thank you. You scratch out my insides and splay them in your poems. Quite beautifully too. I didn't think such emotions could be portrayed with such beauty.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I find even the most morbid of things can be beautiful.
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I do too. I just can't say it like you do. Mine come out awkwardly... like a first date. Bumping noses when you go to kiss goodnight... Shuffling hands in pockets not knowing where to place them...
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thats why you just keep at it! lol
Embarrassing or not. ha
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOL! So that's your idea of a good time? Sloppy kisses? :P
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No--I meant, get better--not sloppy kisses! LOL
My first kiss sucked man, the guy shoved his tongue down my throat.
Blehhh.
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you have great little nothings. love this.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you are very welcome! :)
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Hawkheart29 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I want my insides back. That just sounds wrong for some reason. lol Iwonder what would happen if someone overheard someone else saying that.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It could mean a lot things.
But I happened to be watching Repo The Genetic Opera. lol
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Hawkheart29 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, i love Repo! Well, the music and the storyline anyway. I can't actually watch it. I don't do gore well at all. Heck I olny know about the movie 'cause my mom's favorite singer, Sarah Brightman, was in it.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's a great movie.
And the gore is actually pretty comical.
I got a good laugh.
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Hawkheart29 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I have a tendency to have panic attacks so I try to avoid triggering them (excessive gore is one of my triggers). ^^; In my gallery there's a pic entilted "Things you she in the graveyard" which was inspired by the movie. Feel free to check it out.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I hate gore too. Can't stand it, and find it pointless in movies.
But this movie I could sit through and not freak out once.
However, if that does trigger panic attacks, I wouldn't risk it either.
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TheInkheart Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I took this as a funny poem, especially the last part when it says, "I want my insides back." :D
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