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The kind of boy mother warned you about by DearPoetry The kind of boy mother warned you about by DearPoetry
Her royal blood: Common as dirt.
A tramp fallen in battle
for gentle eyes.
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:iconbrokengod--veins:
brokengod--veins Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hey there! :wave:

In celebration of 2014's National Poetry Writing Month, I featured your lovely piece in Glory Be Project's daily journal. Have a nice day and keep on writing! :love:
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:iconxxaiko-chanxx:
xxAiko-chanxx Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This made me chuckle. It's splendid :)
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I thought it was quite funny too. lol!
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:icongoodbye-to-you:
Goodbye-to-you Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student General Artist
I am speechless. This is perfect.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you! :D
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:iconmystieka-senko:
Mystieka-Senko Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student General Artist
The visual really strengthens the words, wonderfull
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012   Writer
the movement of the line adds to the beauty of this piece
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It seems to just flow.
Thank you! :)
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:iconnymphe-ar:
Nymphe-AR Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
That was great! I love the..look and feel of it all, literally :)
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
I'm glad!
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:iconaquamarin-graphics:
Aquamarin-Graphics Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh I REALLY love these ! :heart:
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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:iconnondag:
nondag Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
It rocks!
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:iconthehardthinker:
TheHardThinker Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
Poem snake. :iconderpplz:
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:iconprettyflour:
prettyflour Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this concept!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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:iconbeituna:
beituna Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
creepy eyes
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol!
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:iconbeituna:
beituna Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
no realy u got some very different type of creepy eyes.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Where? What are you talking about?
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:iconbeituna:
beituna Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
nothing, just let it go.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Then you shouldn't have commented if you expect me to 'let it go'. :/
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:iconbeituna:
beituna Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
yeah u r right,
look u saw those word differently thats a great job,
i think u eyes are like those martian, did u saw the movie MARS ATTACK, i mean those alien who sound like pack pack. i mean they talk like pack pack sounds funny but i think ur eyes are like those martian, coz in my entire whole life i never saw a different type of poem like u edited, so it was different to me and thats why i said u got creepy eyes. cool?
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:iconsigma-echo-seven:
Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student Writer
Great find!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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:iconthegingermuse:
TheGingerMuse Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
love it
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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:icondragon-paragon:
Dragon-Paragon Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012
Haikus can be easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
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:iconxxpyrochickxx:
xXPyRoChIcKXx Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student
Haikus are*
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:icondragon-paragon:
Dragon-Paragon Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
Oh, they called me on it, thanks. We're changing it to 'Haikus can be hard'.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your first line has 6 syllables. :P
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:icondragon-paragon:
Dragon-Paragon Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012
DAMMIT.

Change that to 'Haikus can be hard'.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOL
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:iconsarcasticsarcasm:
SarcasticSarcasm Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student General Artist
You amaze me 0_0
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
How so?
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:iconsarcasticsarcasm:
SarcasticSarcasm Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student General Artist
I've never seen anyone do anything like this, and it amazes me how you can take words from a page and create a totally different story and sentence from it.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's not all that hard, you could do it too. :D
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SarcasticSarcasm Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student General Artist
<3<3<3<3~
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:iconxmaydayx:
XMaydayX Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
I agree, its pretty cool
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:iconminimonster767:
MiniMonster767 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I am in awe... :clap:
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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:iconl3ridgette:
l3ridgette Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh gawd, i love this :D
instant fave and watch
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, thank you! :heart:
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:iconreprogrammed:
Reprogrammed Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student Writer
AMAZING...
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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:iconkitttylullabies:
KitttyLullabies Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is great. I love found poetry
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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:iconyolanda-b-cool:
Yolanda-B-Cool Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist
It's lovely :)
:iconbwavoplz:
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, bunny! :3
Thank you.
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