You have too much time on your hands, Love,
folding paper cranes with broken fingers,
wishing to see northern lights in the eyes of strangers.
There are no lions between your bed sheets
who understand your hunger better than I-
You are licking my wounds; one with the wild.
I swear it's you behind these eyelids- untamed
and desired by this lonely poetic canvas
stained with blood, ink, and words I can't fucking say.
You look like a Goddess standing there reading my skin
quiet and shameless, proud of the gaping hole in my chest.
I know it then, like I know my own counterclockwise heart;
I should never trust my own kind.
"I'll build you up, my Troy, just to tear you down again."
And I whispered please, please, please...
This has a lovely topic, but is so soft that you almost don't realize it's darkness and sexiness. "There are no lions between your bed sheets, who understand your hunger better than I-" My favorite line. There is a lover who is hurting another by looking for someone else (that is what I gathered from it anyways), but you, the narrator, stay for it. You knew that there would be pain, but the prospect of love keeps you hoping that it will get better.
Maybe I'm not making any sense to you at all, or it's way different from the way you felt in writing this, but that's how I felt about this beautiful poem.
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