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she
fell in love
with Pluto
while he was
still a planet;

but
she could only manage
to fall in love
with shooting stars
in the glare of your eyes.

what more could you truly ask
from a universe girl?
Another poem from my 'secrets series'.
The secret:

“I get by on infatuations with everything and everyone, falling in love with concepts and never people.”

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RunsWithBooks Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
That is a really cool concept (to do the secrets thing), as well as the actual poem. I really appreciate the contrast. I think you could create a really interesting character out of this.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I agree. :D Thank you!
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:iconoviedomedina:
oviedomedina Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Excellent execution!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconoviedomedina:
oviedomedina Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
No problem!
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This feels like my life.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mine too.
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:iconpiecanaryi:
piecanaryi Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
it's been fifteen years since i came across a poem so well crafted that i felt i would understand life a little more every time i read it.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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brokengod--veins Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What font is that? Looks nifty! :heart:
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