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Writers Block by DearPoetry Writers Block by DearPoetry
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:iconsweaterrs:
Okay, I'll try this out~!

Pros:

• The grammar in this is very good
• Correct usage of vocabulary
• There is a lot of emotion put into this
• Very original concept
• Good concept
• Placed positive reactions into a negative situation

Cons:
• Hard to understand
• "&" should be replaced with "and"
• In the line "that's what writers block feels like," , "writer's block " is the correct punctuation.

~I hope this helped and I am sorry if anyone disagrees, this is my opinion and what I think the author should play around with for future poems or writings ~
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I loved the effect this poem has. It gives the reader a sense of what readers block is and can be... I have personally been through that sense many times before yet wish no other to experience it for it can change your view on the story and alter it from what you might have originally wrote if not for the writers block
I agree with :iconderpanimal: that the & sign should be replaced with "and" but disagree on the change of writers block, it is spelled correctly in the poem...

This is a truly unique poem..I love this in whole <3

I hope you continue with your most beautiful poems.
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:iconghearradh:

i can't express how beautiful this is. the words flow together like they are pebbles in a river. this poem is simply amazing.
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DearPoetry May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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sulabyrd Apr 21, 2013
Featured on my Tumblr blog: [link].
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you!
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MistressofQuills Apr 8, 2013  Student Writer
Wow....this is beautifully put! I'm a writer too, so your words struck a particular chord in me:D Well said!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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MistressofQuills May 31, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome:aww:
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:iconsomethingsophie:
Absolutely stunning.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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sulabyrd Apr 7, 2013
Featured: [link].
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