You told me once
you would break my stars,
tear them from the sky and devour them
s l o w l y.
I neglected to tell you
they all had their own feelings
and your bruises form my own constellation
in the quiet valleys of my firefly skin.
I am the milky way.
And you, my sweet-
You are nothing more
than a dead star
with a pretty name.










You need no touch-ups or help, because frankly, comparing my work to yours, I might be the one needing the help. All your works 5 stars because they are simply amazing.
(I'm going to start rambling now
Have you ever tried to eat pizza backwards? It's so hard isn't it? I tried once and it was really funny.
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