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You told me once

you would break my stars,

tear them from the sky and devour them


s l o w l y.


I neglected to tell you

they all had their own feelings

and your bruises form my own constellation

in the quiet valleys of my firefly skin.


I am the milky way.


And you, my sweet-

You are nothing more

than a dead star

with a pretty name.

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Dragons Blood You are an art journal,
all scraps of paper and profound quotes
of those you say "I'll fucking know one day",
because you love to shock me
with even more profound profanities
and those watercolor fingers
you use to shut me up.

Gently. Always gently.

You leave me moon-eyed;
Dragons Blood still lingering
in the wake of your
heartbeats against mine.
Missing Bones We spent our nights star gazing
on the top of that local bar on 5th street.
You said you loved me by night,
that no star or moon in any given universe
could compare to me; that we were lost warriors
searching for a home within the roots of one another.

I believed myself a wandering ghost among the living,
searching for missing bones and the warmth of another's grave.

You shook me then,
kissing me where it hurt most-
just to test a theory.
You whispered,

"Like dead birds,
you are not faceless;
your rib cage has a meaning."

And I believed I loved you then
underneath the moon and stars
tipsy on your smile and your words
a
Witch Trial I believe I was a ginger headed poet in a past life,
who wrote love through magik spells—
burning candle wax, whispering incantations
under a full moon and painting pale,
naked flesh with dirt and ash.
Dancing with ghostly ravens through flames,
to the thumpthumpthump of my storm heart,
as it became one with the earth.
I roared my passions and my glory
to the heavens above, laughing
like a crazy eyed crone for the sake
of those who feared me.
My witches tongue, hissing, 'Come hither!'
as heat licked my shoulders like an old lover,
come home.

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:iconjayvonmonroe123:
A well written poem. something i love you did them line by line delicately chosen words it looks like. tell me was it an easy poem to write, is it ever easy to write poetry. but you my friend wrote this very nicely with your other poems as well dragons blood,missing bones, and witch trial. so please write more poems so everyone can enjoy it. (this is like my first critique so if its bad sorry its my first.) other convos. cause i cant write anything else i have these pictures of ponys and lion king art so check them out
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~Dearpoetry, another BEAUTIFUL work done by a wonderful poet. I love the personification of how the person of subject describes "and your bruises form my own constellation in the quiet valleys of my firefly skin." I must commend you highly on that sentence, highly descriptive and emotive.

You need no touch-ups or help, because frankly, comparing my work to yours, I might be the one needing the help. All your works 5 stars because they are simply amazing.

(I'm going to start rambling now :iconwellthenplz:)

Have you ever tried to eat pizza backwards? It's so hard isn't it? I tried once and it was really funny.
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It's those last four lines that do it for me. Fantastic.
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~DearPoetry Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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~Sigma-Echo-Seven Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Succinct and beautiful. Well done. :)

Also, quite a bit of spam, eh?
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~DearPoetry Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It got on the front page.
And I got bombarded with raunchy ads. :/
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~Sigma-Echo-Seven Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The price of fame, I suppose.

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~DearPoetry Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
And sorry, thank you for the compliment.
Glad you enjoyed this piece. :)
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~Sigma-Echo-Seven Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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