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i lost my cigarettes today while
sparing kisses to too many witches
with apastron blackberry tongues.


& like the scattered stars of scars,
saturn's rings whispered secrets
to the telescope eyes of these strangers
cradling galaxies between lovely bones-


( their fingertip heat
knowing nothing of intermissions. )

-dp
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Apastron: When two stars that orbit each other are as far away from each other as they can get.
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edmidt Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I really LOVE space imagery! It's a funny coincidence... A couple years ago I wrote poem to my boyfriend, one line mentioning Saturn's rings singing. I thought maybe I had seen it somewhere, do you know if the personification of Saturn appears in anything else? Just wondering :) Anyway, great work.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nope, sorry I don't. lol
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chromakusanagi Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist


...I am glad I found you!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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chromakusanagi Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist



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Adonael Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mellifluous and good use of the word 'apastron', which is a new word for the day :)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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TheNightwalker Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful images, beutiful words. Thank you.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, no need to thank me!
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TheNightwalker Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The need doesn't overpower the spontaneous feelings though :)
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