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this is hard for the world around us to grasp:
these wildfires raging in our retinas
& the sins we wear like demonic similes
on our tongues- they are not enough.

& i am so fucking sorry of saying i'm sorry.


but, tell me,
what is a young poet(ess) to do
with veins made of kite strings?
Haven't really been feeling myself as of late.
Words are hiding from me.

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Mandi7MM Oct 1, 2013  Student Photographer
I have featured this lovely work here: fav.me/d6ojohh
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DearPoetry Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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Mandi7MM Jan 16, 2014  Student Photographer
You're welcome! :D
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:iconpinkie-rage-plz:
GET YOURSELF PUBLISHED!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, Pinkie!
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DompteurLoup Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I notice a lot of references to kites and strings in your poetry. Why is that?
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DearPoetry Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Because I like kites, and strings keep them grounded. :)
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DompteurLoup Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Makes sense.. I like it :)
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PrussianPersephone Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can relate to this so much. All your poetry always manages to speak to me in some way. God, you have talent.

Veins made of kite strings...

That's my favorite imagery from this piece.
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DearPoetry Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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