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“I’ve never planted roots-“
she said,
believing her body to be
on a road trip
to nowhere.

“Well—“ I smiled,
“let’s be like roses & brier.
We will go nowhere, together.”
Another poem from my 'secrets series'
The secret:
“I’ve been running for so long to the point where I don’t remember why I’m running in the first place. “
More can be found here: [link]

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:iconunderorion:
underorion Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
just as a note, 'briar' is spelled with an 'a', not an 'e' ^-^
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
....actually, it can be spelled both ways. C:
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chancerox Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
is there a way to submit secrets not on tumblr? tumblr's blocked on my school computer -.-
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You can send me a dA note if you'd like. :)
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RainyhawaiiV2 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Why you're running isn't so much as important as long as you know where you're running to, not from, the rest takes care of itself.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes. :D
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Asdfgh. This is so...I just don't know. I love it.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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:iconchapav:
chapaV Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Professional Writer
I like the succinct approach :)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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akkajess Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Student Writer
Hi! Your wonderful piece has been featured here [link] :heart::tighthug:
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!~ :D
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twiggster101 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Student Writer
I am a new comer to your poems, but wow was I blown away in just the first one I read and from there on out every poem I have read has been amazing, this one included. Spectacular job on your poems, you have a great amount of skill when it comes to writing.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you soooo very much for the compliment! :heart:
And taking the time to read my work! It means a lot!
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twiggster101 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Writer
Your welcome!!:heart:
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BloodSonic1 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
... Isn't it spelt "briar"?
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It can be spelt both ways. :)
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BloodSonic1 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
I've never heard it spelt with an e. Are you sure?
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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BloodSonic1 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
Yeah I looked it up after I asked. I do that.
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SognatoreViolento Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
...that "road trip to nowhere"... holy shit. It basically is how I feel all the fucking time. Fuck depression.
This is perfect.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
C: thank you!
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wolflogics Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
very nice poem :) beautiful
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! C:
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sweetsweetsunshines Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So few words, so much meaning, beautiful poem <3
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconmelalina:
Melalina Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Professional General Artist
You manage to express so much feeling - in so few words.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Very beautiful. It's so simple, yet it felt so powerful. :)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Eiolo Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
I like this :) I wrote a poem that starts with "A jungle of genius springs to life. She never planted seeds but we're dancing in it." Reading this one of yours gave me the same smile writing my one did :) It's a smile of experience. Like a war medal, you lived in a love close to being more than can be handled. Love should be called Mercury's Orbit :)
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad my words brought a smile to your face.

Mercury's Orbit. Beautiful. :heart:
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Eiolo Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
I have had no sleep and worked like 10 hours. I'm just glad I made some kind of sense :) They did deliver a grin.
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Wyhberry Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
I love your poems, always. This one is particularly great! Way to go!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Student Writer
Your poetry seriously breaks my heart every time I read it. It's so beautiful.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry. :( But thank you!
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Student Writer
Don't be, it's a good heartbreak. :) & you're welcome!
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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