This is so beautiful. When I first read this poem there is such imagery that I could picture every detail perfectly in my mind.
When I re-read it again I found myself able to link it with parts of me and situations that are happening at the current moment.
I think the lines "from your ink-cracked lips onto the bare bones of my anatomy" was what really what sent a shiver down my spine because of your way with words.
I have never read anything at all like this and I think that it is one of the most unique poems I have ever read.
I agree with everyone that it is like the Phantom of the Opera, but it reminded me also of a dying flower. Anyone else? AND BY THE WAY THIS IS TOTALLY FREAKING AMAZING!!!
When I re-read it again I found myself able to link it with parts of me and situations that are happening at the current moment.
I think the lines "from your ink-cracked lips onto the bare bones of my anatomy" was what really what sent a shiver down my spine because of your way with words.
I have never read anything at all like this and I think that it is one of the most unique poems I have ever read.
Well done. Bravo.
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